It also suffers slightly from imagination speed > writing speed – a problem I had before I learned to type really bloody fast.
But Determined has some nice word choices, and the drawings are very good, too. Not to mention that it was all done in her own time and with no encouragement from us (well, other than me being a writer and the Lovely Melanie being an editor!)
I’m hoping we can encourage Millie’s vocabulary some more, but she’s already doing pretty well by herself. Yesterday she surprised us, becoming super-excited about a new duvet cover, and describing it as “vibrant”. Not a word I’d have used when I was eight years old.